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Changes in the LCIdol competition

Tue Apr 14, 2009 5:53 pm by Demon Jester Gin

As some of you may have heard, I've taken over this competition (many thanks to Cel for allowing me to) seeing as I probably won't be entering anyway, and I'd like for everyone that plans to join in o...

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Story (No name..yet)!

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Re: Story (No name..yet)!

Post by Reiko on Wed May 21, 2008 10:07 pm

Hahaha, I'm working on a little just now actually :].
I'm so happy people like it ! ^_____^
Gives me motivation to stick at it Razz

Edit: Alright this is all I have just now, it's late and I'm being moaned at for being on the computer too late so...pretty short Razz.
Also, why the heck does the text go black when i copy and paste it? :S

Some technical errors because i couldn't be arsssed proofreading lol, i'll do it later, I keep going back and making minor changes to the story anyway.


Chapter 3 – The Truth

Tony, only halfway down the corridor was beginning to feel guilty about leaving Megami, but going back would be suicidal. He could hear one of the creatures screeching not so far behind him and quickened his pace. What the hell is going on? What the hell are they? Why do they want me? Were just some of the questions running through Tony’s head.

Beginning to get a stitch in his side, Tony opened the door to the stairwell only to find two more of the creatures waiting for him.

He slammed the door shut and ran as fast as his legs could carry him, to the elevator and bashed on the call button repeatedly. Then he heard numerous gunshots and then the shattering of glass from the direction of his apartment and he had the horrible image of Megami. Dead.

Tony could feel the air around him getting colder as the creatures were catching up. Could smell their burning yet fleshy smell…hear them growling and moaning…feel them breathing on the back of his neck…Ping! The doors opened in the nick of time. Tony dived in and hit the ground floor button, the doors closing just before one of the monsters could get in, leaving nothing but a puff of blue smoke.

Tony slumped into a corner on the floor, gasping for breath as tears of fear filled his eyes.

As the elevator shuddered to a halt, the doors opened slowly to reveal the lobby plunged in almost complete darkness, except from the orange glow from the streetlamps outside. The sound of static from the security guards television was all that could be heard.

Afraid to call out in case one of the creatures was lurking in the darkness, Tony slowly crept out from the elevator and into the ominous orange glow, peering around the corner in search of any signs of life.

A great feeling of relief and sanctuary overwhelmed him when he saw a figure in the observation office. It was the nightshift security guard.

“Jack! Jack is that you?” he quickened his pace and stopped in the doorway, gasping in horror.
Jack was on all fours, coughing and spluttering, blood pouring from his mouth. Tony began to back away as Jack shrieked like an animal and his dark skin turned to a bizarre blue coloured smoke and a cloak appeared as if from nowhere and enveloped his quaking body.
He was one of them.

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Re: Story (No name..yet)!

Post by Celahir on Thu May 22, 2008 10:10 pm

O_O Tonys in trouble!! =O That was good.Was alot shorter but it kept me glued till the end! MORE MORE MOOORE!


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Post by Reiko on Fri Jul 04, 2008 12:58 pm

What Tony had once known as Jack stopped shaking and slowly turned his head to look at Tony, his – it’s – face hidden by a burgundy cloak, but eyes the colour of flames looked intently over at him, like a hungry lion about to pounce on its prey. Taking a deep breath, Tony turned to run towards the door - the way out of this messed up building - but the monster leapt towards him, knocking him over and pinning him to the ground.
Screaming for help at the top of lungs, Tony couldn’t help but think these were going to be his last minutes. He struggled trying to fight off the beast in vain…


Megami slowly opened her eyes, disorientated with a sharp pain in the back of her head. The room was in darkness. There was a horrible feeling of loneliness and despair boiling up inside of her and she suddenly realised that the lights weren’t out – one of the demons was on top of her, it’s claws dug into her shoulder. She squealed and attempted to push it off, reaching for the gun hidden in her boot but it was too heavy. She reached for the baseball bat nearby but it was too far away. The monster’s razor sharp tongue was heading for her neck…

“Get off of her!”

There were a number of gun shots and with a blood curdling shriek the demon disappeared with a puff! A hand outstretched towards Megami but she ignored it, pulling herself up using the kitchen counter.
Squinting into to the dark mist the monster had left behind, she could see the figure of a man.

“Tony?” she asked, weakened by the horrible feeling the monster had left her with.
“No stupid, it’s me – Kevin.”
“Kevin? How did you know they’d be here?”

“They followed you here from the police station…”
Megami looked at her feet guiltily. It was her fault. They’d found Tony because of her. Why could she never do anything right?

“It's not your fault Meg,” said Kevin, knowing all to well that she was blaming herself “they were probably in another form, you couldn’t have known. Now come on let’s go find Tony!”
The two of them headed for what was once the door but what was now only a splintered ensemble of wood clinging desperately to its hinges, and stepped out into the dimly lit corridor. They heard a door slamming at the other side of the corridor, but there was no way they could pursue the noise – the hallway was crawling with demons. Thinking they had gone unnoticed, Megami and Kevin crept quietly back into the apartment. A sudden hissing sound behind them then a rustling noise caused them to spin around just in time to see a figure flying towards them.
Pulling out the gun that was resting in her boot, she and Kevin began to fire blindly into the darkness but it was no use, the creature wasn’t being harmed at all.

“Follow me!” shouted Megami, running for the window. She looked down at the street six stories below; there was a pile of bin bags and rubbish that might break their fall…
“You’re not seriously considering jumping are you?” shouted Kevin over the pointless gunfire.
“Do we really have a choice? Come on!”

Megami tried opening the window but it was stuck… She frowned at it a minute, staring with a look of great concentration.

Crack.

The glass shattered and fell onto the street below. Smiling to herself, she swallowed her fear and plummeted out of the window, followed by Kevin.

It was over within a flash and the two of them landed with a thud in the trash below, Kevin in a crouched position on his feet and Megami awkwardly on her back.
“Great idea Meg!” said Kevin offering his hand to help her up.
“Really?” she said, squealing in disgust as she wiped some half eaten spaghetti off of her forehead, “Eugh. It stinks!”
Laughing, Kevin helped her up then headed round to the front of the building. They could see through the glass doors that the foyer was plunged in darkness, furniture was upturned and the window of the observation office was smashed. But there was no sign of life.
“Where do you think Tony’s gone?” Megami could not stop thinking of Tony lying dead somewhere with two holes in his neck and a demon crouching over him…
As if he had heard her, there was a scream from within the building and Tony fell on the floor with a large figure on top of him.
Pulling out their guns once more, Kevin and Megami ran through the glass doors, firing at the creature, gunshots drowning out its cries of anguish as it fell back into a heap. Silence. It lay motionless in a pathetic huddle, Tony jumped up and grabbed the coat stand in the corner and thumped it on the head repeatedly.
“Take that you bastard! I’ll teach you to eat me!”
Megami and Kevin looked from Tony to each other, barely able to suppress their laughter.
Normality was restored. For now.

Tony dropped the coat stand and looked up at Kevin and Megami frowning. Megami had never seen him look this angry before, so much pent up rage burning in his eyes!
“You,” he growled, pointing at Megami, panting for breath, “Tell me what the hell is going on here, or so help me I will call the police and tell them that all of this was your doing!”
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